----- Original Message -----
From: "Louis Pasztor"
To:
Sent: Thursday, September 28, 2000 10:00 PM
Subject: [Cel] Check this Out please
> Okay, check this out. Something like that which i was proposing for the
> Alien Game.
>
> http://apolyton.net/forums/Forum14/HTML/000241.html?44#44
>
> Tell me what you think....and wondering, my writing there suck? The Truth
> please :)
>
> -LordLMP
>
> _________________________________________________________________________
Dear LordLMP
As you asked I will give a honest opinion, it looks good.
The plot basics are clear and well thought out. I would change it a bit but
thats personal opinion for you.
Gripes: Spelling....yes I know its nit picking but those spelling mistakes
can change a professional looking document into something that to put it
quite frankly I would use to wrap fish and chips in....sorry if that was to
harsh. The only other (possible) problem is the size of font used for the
heading buttons, their bordering on the small size, such things should be
easy to see since they guide the reader on.
Hope this was what you meant by giving a honest opinion
Yours
Marcus S
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