[Ely] [Cel]- Aerphal - 2nd draft results 2844

Aerphal 2844
Action 1 and 2 Propaganda to west of West Aerphral (2nd of 6yrs)
As before but with more focus.
**Difficulty – Hard (-1)**
-1 Not favourably received last year
+1 Full support of the Aphreal houses(future trade advantage)
+1 Double action.
+1 Double the amount of time spent(6 years instead of three)
+2 Modifier
**-1-1+1+1(0000)  The words of the Goddess and the disaster scare and
confuse people.  Reviewing their mistakes last year, the message is
changed to better appeal to the people to the west.  New contacts are
made and the pace is slowed.  While the results do show up as positive
they certainly are better then last year.  Perhaps there is hope.**


Action3 - New Religion appears Hyrea`s Cry
Dissatisfied with their leaders wish to reunite Aerphral, numerous
"Young Lords" band together with several clergymen and found Hyrea`s
Cry. Named after the Goddesses cry heard all over the continent. Its aim
is..the aim is to travel across the continent gaining wealth and
experience in warfare (& maybe battle magic) to gain/found a brotherhood
of Arms, and once perceived to be ready to conquer the upstarts of East
Aerphal

** Primary Determinant – ?? **
** Difficulty – Very Hard (–2) **(New religion’s are extremely difficult
to start.  Perhaps a crusade of the current one would make more sense
here) **
+1 - Voice of Goddess
+1 - Memory is still fresh of invasion
+1 - young bloods need for action, and Bravado
+1  - Plays on national prejudice  ** change to Bad blood between West &
East Aerphal **
** -1 – Single yr. action – too fast, this should be a mult-yr. action
**
+1 Modifier.
+1+1+1+1 (000-) =+1

  Action 4  Further talks between east and west( this sounds familiar)
With the good will shown last year, the talks gain more momentum and
followers.
**Difficulty – Hard (-1)**
+1 Goodwill shown from both sides
+1 Political gain to attending members
-1 Still some staunch critics
+1 Potential financial gain on both sides
** -1 – bad blood between east & west encouraged by Hyrea’s Cry **
** Primary Determinant - ?? **

+0 Modifier
**-1+1+1-1+1-1(0-00)=0  Talks faltering, this country has been split for
a long time.**

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Hi,

   I decided we have to keep moving.  I will be away
from 6/24-30, so I want to finish before I leave.  I
will be very busy the last day or two, so the faster
you send stuff in the better.

   I know I am waiting on Reyclean & QoN.  The new
players societies are almost done and their societies
& moves should be done shortly.  Also, I need to hear
from everyone else who has been sent stuff (or not)
where we stand.  Whose final and who needs something
from me.

   Anyone who does not send revisions I will list as
final.  If you are ready to go final please let me
know.  If you have told me to go to final and I have
not listed it as such, please let me know again.  My
systems are getting better, and not yet perfect.

    If I owe anyone besides the new folks results and
have not yet done them or you have not received it,
please let me know I will check my records.  If I do
not hear from you, everything goes to final, so please
confirm your status.

    I will also be away from mid until the end of
July, and will try and do 2845 quickly, so start
getting actions in for that.

Joel

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Joel
 Everything okay here (that if revised story accepted)
Marcus


> Hi,
> 
>    I decided we have to keep moving.  I will be away
> >from 6/24-30, so I want to finish before I leave.  I
> will be very busy the last day or two, so the faster
> you send stuff in the better.
> 
>    I know I am waiting on Reyclean & QoN.  The new
> players societies are almost done and their societies
> & moves should be done shortly.  Also, I need to hear
> >from everyone else who has been sent stuff (or not)
> where we stand.  Whose final and who needs something
> >from me.
> 
>    Anyone who does not send revisions I will list as
> final.  If you are ready to go final please let me
> know.  If you have told me to go to final and I have
> not listed it as such, please let me know again.  My
> systems are getting better, and not yet perfect.
> 
>     If I owe anyone besides the new folks results and
> have not yet done them or you have not received it,
> please let me know I will check my records.  If I do
> not hear from you, everything goes to final, so please
> confirm your status.
> 
>     I will also be away from mid until the end of
> July, and will try and do 2845 quickly, so start
> getting actions in for that.
> 
> Joel
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What revised story? :-)

Joel

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>  Everything okay here (that if revised story
> accepted)
> Marcus
> 
> 
> > Hi,
> > 
> >    I decided we have to keep moving.  I will be
> away
> > >from 6/24-30, so I want to finish before I leave.
>  I
> > will be very busy the last day or two, so the
> faster
> > you send stuff in the better.
> > 
> >    I know I am waiting on Reyclean & QoN.  The new
> > players societies are almost done and their
> societies
> > & moves should be done shortly.  Also, I need to
> hear
> > >from everyone else who has been sent stuff (or
> not)
> > where we stand.  Whose final and who needs
> something
> > >from me.
> > 
> >    Anyone who does not send revisions I will list
> as
> > final.  If you are ready to go final please let me
> > know.  If you have told me to go to final and I
> have
> > not listed it as such, please let me know again. 
> My
> > systems are getting better, and not yet perfect.
> > 
> >     If I owe anyone besides the new folks results
> and
> > have not yet done them or you have not received
> it,
> > please let me know I will check my records.  If I
> do
> > not hear from you, everything goes to final, so
> please
> > confirm your status.
> > 
> >     I will also be away from mid until the end of
> > July, and will try and do 2845 quickly, so start
> > getting actions in for that.
> > 
> > Joel
> > 
> >
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> What revised story? :-)
 
 Joel
  Oops sorry, just joined another PBEM a week ago and sent the wrong message
to the wrong person.  Won`t happen again.....honest.
 By the way how are things your end? going well I hope.  Over here is not so
dandy but thats my problem.  Some good news, my second child (god I feel
old) is due sometime around the beginning of September

Oho home time...till then

Matt

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[Ely] [Cel]- 2844 Is Over. 2845 will End on 7/12

You should all have copies of most final moves, w/ several exceptions;
Reyclean & Aunderli's revised stories; Jawalla & Dark Shadows need a
chance to respond to first results; And finally since the Queen of
Nightmares was not revised and there were some strong comments or
changes requested from Dom, I do not have time to make the corrections
myself so I will push the introduction of making QoN a player society
until 2845.

In the interest of keeping things moving, I will leave Jason, our
assistant GM to adjudicate any changes.  Please direct all discussions
towards him and I will accept his decisions.  If he prefers to wait on
some decisions, then I guess I will decide any remaining questions upon
my return.

I look forward to talking to all of you in a week.

Joel

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If I have forgotten to resolve any actions my apologies, if Jason can
not resolve it then it will be done upon my return.  Until then happy
plotting.

Joel

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[Ely] [Cel]- NEW TURN 2845 will end on July 12

Since I will be away in July from 7/14-29, I would
like to try and get 2845 done as quickly as possible
to make up for time I lost in 2844.  I will adjucate
and perhaps leave only larger questions that I really
can not figure out for revisions.  The rest hopefully,
we can just leave as is instead of tweaking as much as
we have in the past.

I know some of you do not mind the longer schedule we
have been working on for this past move, so if this
schedule proves burdensome, it can be adjusted.  If
you do have problems getting your actions in within
these final dates for 2844 or 2845 please let me know
and we will make changes as necessary.

We can then have all of August for 2846 depending on
people's summer schedules.

Joel

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