
Hi For various reasons I wasn't able to initialize the next year last weekend. Sorry about that. I'll try to do it tomorrow at the latest. juuso ---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
Burcancy 1438 - Rough Draft Action 1 - Continue to develop Spy Network (Yr. 1 of 10) Action 2 - Increase ranks of Weather Mages Action 3&4 - Research - Develop the "V'raal Dance" of the Burcancy's own or a counter to it. (Yr. 1 of 10) Action 5 - Re-educate the young Princeling. He is to be kept under heavy guard by warriors and mages but is to be pumped for information about the V'raal and to introduced to life outside the V'raal. --------------------------------- Do you Yahoo!? Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail AddressGuard---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
You know, it suddenly occurred to me the other day: what do the children of the former Cedonian empress and the V'raal High Lord look like? Because while the V'raal are humanoid, they are *not* human. Indeed, if you look at the "Called and Bound" short story on the old Qaiyore website, the V'raal have an extraordinarily close resemblence in both mind and body to Grand Admiral Thrawn from the Star Wars books: dark blue skin, blue-black hair, red eyes, a talent for combat, and a deep appreciation of art. I strongly suspect that the children do not look entirely human. Andrew Janssen --- Joel Elfmanwrote: > Burcancy 1438 - Rough Draft > > Action 1 - Continue to develop Spy Network (Yr. 1 of 10) > > Action 2 - Increase ranks of Weather Mages > > Action 3&4 - Research - Develop the "V'raal Dance" of the Burcancy's > own or a counter to it. (Yr. 1 of 10) > > Action 5 - Re-educate the young Princeling. He is to be kept under > heavy guard by warriors and mages but is to be pumped for information > about the V'raal and to introduced to life outside the V'raal. > > > > --------------------------------- > Do you Yahoo!? > Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail > AddressGuard---------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net. __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail AddressGuard http://antispam.yahoo.com/whatsnewfree ---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
Andrew,
Good point, and I am sure it will cause some problems for the readjustment period or for the rest of his life. I am extremely busy at work and some other pursuits so I haven't had time to flesh out a story or even this draft yet. If you want to lend your talents to a story or some ideas please feel free.
This feud w/ the V'raal will probably be part of the storyline for a while.
Joel
Andrew Janssen wrote:
You know, it suddenly occurred to me the other day: what do the
children of the former Cedonian empress and the V'raal High Lord look
like? Because while the V'raal are humanoid, they are *not* human.
Indeed, if you look at the "Called and Bound" short story on the old
Qaiyore website, the V'raal have an extraordinarily close resemblence
in both mind and body to Grand Admiral Thrawn from the Star Wars books:
dark blue skin, blue-black hair, red eyes, a talent for combat, and a
deep appreciation of art.
I strongly suspect that the children do not look entirely human.
Andrew Janssen
--- Joel Elfman wrote:
> Burcancy 1438 - Rough Draft
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> Action 1 - Continue to develop Spy Network (Yr. 1 of 10)
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> Action 2 - Increase ranks of Weather Mages
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> Action 3&4 - Research - Develop the "V'raal Dance" of the Burcancy's
> own or a counter to it. (Yr. 1 of 10)
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> Action 5 - Re-educate the young Princeling. He is to be kept under
> heavy guard by warriors and mages but is to be pumped for information
> about the V'raal and to introduced to life outside the V'raal.
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Hi, this message opens year 1439. Again, action submission in two weeks, and the next year begins just before Christmas. Here are the events, and Vision number 3. *Onagir [-6]:* The Scepter is stolen, and the King of the Wood disappears with it. This happens at a bad time for the Onagir, as the Kings successor is not fit to take up his duty (being 3 years old). *Shanari [-5]:* A war breaks out between the eastern and western tribes. For a long time, the tensions have been growing. Finally, the peace is broken by a sudden attack on the Seeresses. Each side blaims the other on the attack. *Exquaestio [-3]:* Someone tries to steal the Book of Travels, killing two andaran, and seriously wounding one. The theft fails, but the thief escapes. *Kaeir [-3]:* The representatives of Kaeir (Major Houses) in Tirrot, Cedonia, are found guilty of illlegal activities (e.g. smugling), and are expelled. While their actions were clearly for their own personal benefit, this does not give a very good impression of the Kaeir Republic. "The old pirate blood shows through..." Visions, part III: A man, hidden in the shadows on his cloak, sat on a simple chair beside a large table, reading a sheet of paper in his left hand. His right hand was tapping a simple rhythm on the table. After a while, the man put the sheet back on the table, pushed it towards the other side of the table, and said: "This is going to cost quite a lot, you know." On the other side of the table, another man - this one bareheaded, with a red emblem of three triangles touching each other on his chest - simply nodded. "Yes, we know. We are prepared to pay you 10000 silver crowns now, and 50000 crowns on delivery." The first one hesitated for a moment, then took the sheet back, rolled it, and put it inside his jacket. "Yes, you do know. You always have. What about that other thing?" The bareheaded man stood up saying: "Please, follow me. You are about to receive a great honour." The two men left the spacious office through a back door, and descended along a spiralling staircase. On the bottom of the stairs, a small corridor led them to another door; this one beautifully ornamented with wood-cuttings. The bareheaded man made a small sign with his hands in front of his chest, and then opened the door. Inside, there was a small square room, 10 feet accross. The bareheaded man stepped inside, and lit four candles on either side of the door. The opposite wall was painted matte-black reflecting no light at all. The cloaked man followed, and the door was shut. "This is the Small Chamber", said the bareheaded man. "In here, the Protae receive and give council to single, selected, pilgrims. You are here because of they ordered it so." The bareheaded then faced the black wall, dropped to his knees, and begun a low chant. At first, nothing happened, but then the opposite wall rippled. The ripples stretched, gained color, and suddenly the wall flashed into a bright mosaic of colors, shapes, and sounds. Most of the sounds were almost unaudible, but one of them gained strength, and it said: "Human Adan. You have worked for us before. It is good. This thing. It is highly guarded, but you will get it, and bring it here, to this place. Take good care of it; it must be whole when you bring it here. It must be complete." The cloaked man bowed deep and said: "As you say my Lord. It will be complete when I deliver it here. I hear and understand." Suddenly, a shaft of light sprang from the mosaic, wrapped itself around the cloaked man, and tightened. The man collapsed to floor with a soft thump. "You do? Then why do you come here with betrayal on your tongue? Uri, find us another. This one was flawed." ---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
Juha, I must take issue with the events for the Shanari. They are a bit out of date. Firstly, the seeresses are all dead, or living in Mir. Secondly, most of the Shanari have been uniting for 15 years or so under a theocratic federation known as the Commonwealth of the Shanariyya, whose new religion arose at the end of the Sinari wars and had been playing a major civilising role on the nomadic tribes. A holy book, standardised law, a written script, new trade routes, a standing army, even a currency. As for Kaeir, very few of the Major Houses actually pre-date the Taltheran conquest, so the question of them having "pirate blood" is actually quite improbable. As for smuggling, which professional merchant does not? Juha Vesantowrote: Hi, this message opens year 1439. Again, action submission in two weeks, and the next year begins just before Christmas. Here are the events, and Vision number 3. *Onagir [-6]:* The Scepter is stolen, and the King of the Wood disappears with it. This happens at a bad time for the Onagir, as the Kings successor is not fit to take up his duty (being 3 years old). *Shanari [-5]:* A war breaks out between the eastern and western tribes. For a long time, the tensions have been growing. Finally, the peace is broken by a sudden attack on the Seeresses. Each side blaims the other on the attack. *Exquaestio [-3]:* Someone tries to steal the Book of Travels, killing two andaran, and seriously wounding one. The theft fails, but the thief escapes. *Kaeir [-3]:* The representatives of Kaeir (Major Houses) in Tirrot, Cedonia, are found guilty of illlegal activities (e.g. smugling), and are expelled. While their actions were clearly for their own personal benefit, this does not give a very good impression of the Kaeir Republic. "The old pirate blood shows through..." ---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net. Join the Yahoo! Search Contest - Stand a chance to win prizes!---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
Ibrahim Dughlas wrote: >Firstly, the seeresses are all dead, or living in Mir. > Ah, damn. Well, I'll have to change the event a bit, then. >Secondly, most of the Shanari have been uniting for 15 years or so under a theocratic federation known as the Commonwealth of the Shanariyya, whose new religion arose at the end of the Sinari wars and had been playing a major civilising role on the nomadic tribes. A holy book, standardised law, a written script, new trade routes, a standing army, even a currency. > Well, a civil war is still a very real possibility. So that result stands. >As for Kaeir, very few of the Major Houses actually pre-date the Taltheran conquest, so the question of them having "pirate blood" is actually quite improbable. > No, not improbable. The reasoning is the same as for thinking that all australians have some expelled criminals among their ancestors. You have the label "Kaeir" which ties in with "Pirate", and - recently - a republican. >As for smuggling, which professional merchant does not? > Those that do not get caught? juuso ---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
> >Firstly, the seeresses are all dead, or living in Mir. Actually, dead or living in Annaeyana. Mir has none. (Poor Onagir--the most oppressed people on Qaiyore. JV-do you have a plot afoot with that or shall I do something with it?) ---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
Does anyone have the email account for the Taltheran player? cheers, Ibrahim Underwood Kaeir Join the Yahoo! Search Contest - Stand a chance to win prizes!---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.
Burcancy 1438 - Rough Draft Revised Action 1 - Continue to develop Spy Network (Yr. 1 of 10) Action 2 - Increase ranks of Weather Mages Action 3 - Research - Investigation into developing the "V'raal Dance" of the Burcancy's own or a counter to it. (Yr. 1 of 10) Action 4 - Communicating w/ the V'raal a) A note is sent to the former Empress inviting her to see her son if she comes w/o any V'raal accompanying her, she will be given safe passage. b) All the blood in the cloth is magically removed and placed in a small vial. The cloth is cleaned thoroughly, and the vial and cloth are sent back to the V'raal w/ a note. "Keep it, You'll need it." Action 5 (Tr. 1 of 10)- Re-educate the young Princeling. He is to be kept under heavy guard by warriors and mages but is to be pumped for information about the V'raal and to introduced to life outside the V'raal. --------------------------------- Do you Yahoo!? Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail AddressGuard---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net. --------------------------------- Do you Yahoo!? Protect your identity with Yahoo! Mail AddressGuard---------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, send mail to celandra-off@phoenyx.net.