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CarlCravens
Carl D Cravens

Fri

Jul 28
2000

22:17Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

At last, an applicant that might pass muster.  Your feedback is requested... 

> To my superiors and potential peers: I have interpreted this message as an
> invitation to go into further detail about my game.  If that wasn't the
> intention, feel free to disregard this reply.
> 
> 
> Thank you for considering my application to Phoenyx.net.  I have and am
> playing in the Corner Alternity game (as Stephen Froste) for nearly a year,
> so I do have experience in the realm of PBeM role-playing.  As far as my
> AD&D experience, I was part of a live (pencil and paper) AD&D game that
> lasted for a year, then was forced to break up in deference to busy
> schedules.  This and the lack of role-players in my community were what
> motivated me to start playing by email.  For the past year at the Corner, I
> have been complimented by other players as being both a good storyteller (in
> one case, my character was remembering a secret mission, which I made up
> entirely by myself with no provocation)  and a good role-player, being able
> to predict and relate how my cold (hence the name 'Froste') yet persuasive
> investigator was using his psionics to get information.  I feel I have spent
> enough time playing and gaining experience in PBeM to start running a game
> of my own (to Martin: this by no means implies that I will be leaving the
> Corner).
> 
> The Hymn of Geoffrey has been an idea in the making for quite some time.
> However, until the thought of PBeM games reached me, I believed myself
> unable to live up to the time requirement of the pencil and paper variety.
> This is not to say that I don't expect to have to do a lot of work for this
> game, just that it will be spread over a week rather than in one four-hour
> meeting.
> 
> The Hymn is set in the Forgotten Realms, the most popular Campaign Setting
> for AD&D with the possible exception of Ravenloft, in and around the
> secluded city of Silverymoon, at least in the beginning.  I will do my best
> to create matrix-style adventures, so the players can end up wherever they
> want, or can get to the same place through multiple paths.  The objective of
> the campaign is to help a bard, also named Geoffrey, to write a song about
> his (and therefore their) travels.  This "songwriting" will take place at
> the end of every adventure or dungeon or whenever seems appropriate, and
> will accomplish two things: first and more importantly, it will allow
> players to interact with each other on a higher level, being that they will
> have to collaborate to help Geoffrey the Bard as well as cooperate in the
> game.
> 
> The main (but not final) enemy will be an assassin named Adon, who played a
> bad role in Geoffrey's past and will basically find really nasty ways to
> disrupt the characters' attempts to succeed.  The final, 'big boss' is a
> secret that will only be unleashed at the last possible second meaning
> anywhere from a year to several years from now to never (if the game doesn't
> occur).
> 
> As for the adventure sequence, at this time I don't really have one in
> concrete form.  However, I do know that the introductory adventure, not to
> be too specific, will be an escape attempt by the heroes, involving a lack
> of equipment on their part and an overabundance of orcs.  Thus, they will
> have to use superior tactics to overcome their foes, get back their original
> equipment, and get out.  The intention is that the heroes will not be able
> to overcome the orcs by force alone.
> 
> I hope this addresses everything you have asked for, and feel free to query
> me further if it doesn't.
> 
> 
>  As a side note, I did not notice that their was any kind of financial
> obligation on the part of the Game/Dungeon master, and I don't believe such
> is mentioned on the site.  What is the cost?
> 
> 
> Sincerely,
> 
>                 Geoff Lorenz, a guy who would be a bard in an AD&D world (I
> can play a good blues yarting, which is a guitar to non-Realmsmen and
> non-Realmswomen).


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InfinitePossibil
InfinitePoss

Sun

Jul 30
2000

01:34Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

Hello,

Carl Cravens wrote:

> At last, an applicant that might pass muster.  Your feedback is requested...

This is my first time on this side of the fence, so I'm not sure exactly what you
are expecting in feedback.

That being said, running a PbEM game isn't that hard. I think he will do fine, and
should be allowed onto phoenyx. Besides, it sounds interesting. I may try to get
in on it myself.

Have Fun,
Darren
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JeffJohnson
Jeff Johnson

Sun

Jul 30
2000

07:16Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

Nothing in this submission would make me suspect he wasn't sincere or
competent. He just needs an organized opening blurb to describe his game to
players.

Minor grammar nit :

> This "songwriting" ... will accomplish two things: first and more
> importantly, it will allow players to interact with each other on
> a higher level, being that they will have to collaborate to help
> Geoffrey the Bard as well as cooperate in the game.

What was the second thing?

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CarlCravens
Carl D Cravens

Mon

Jul 31
2000

13:54Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

On Sun, 30 Jul 2000, Jeff Johnson wrote:

> Nothing in this submission would make me suspect he wasn't sincere or
> competent. He just needs an organized opening blurb to describe his game to
> players.

I've already seen that... this was in response to it.  I just wanted a
little more feedback.  I reject too many of these things and like to make
sure I'm giving people a fair shake. 

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NickPendrell
Nick Pendrell

Mon

Jul 31
2000

14:09Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

The guy gets my vote.  It seems like it was ages ago that a halfway competent
submission came in, and this one was definitely more than halfway competent.

Give him a try, I reckon, or else the standards are going to be so impossibly
high that practically no one gets in.

Bye for now,


Nick

I've already seen that... this was in response to it.  I just wanted a
little more feedback.  I reject too many of these things and like to make
sure I'm giving people a fair shake.

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MartinHanley
Martin Hanley

Mon

Jul 31
2000

14:11Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

> The guy gets my vote.  It seems like it was ages ago that a 
> halfway competent
> submission came in, and this one was definitely more than 
> halfway competent.
> 
> Give him a try, I reckon, or else the standards are going to 
> be so impossibly
> high that practically no one gets in.
> 

I'll be honest... he's a player in my game (Corner) and almost always does a
fantastic job of writing... 
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CarlCravens
Carl D Cravens

Mon

Jul 31
2000

14:26Z

Req> Game Request Form hymn (PR#242)

On Mon, 31 Jul 2000, Martin Hanley wrote:

> I'll be honest... he's a player in my game (Corner) and almost always does a
> fantastic job of writing... 

I was hoping to hear from you.  It'd be great if more of our applicants
had references we could check up on. :) 

That's good enough for me. 

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